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POS52401
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PostSubject: Danger on Planet Double Doom   Sun Nov 17, 2013 3:17 pm

Jason discovered that the secret of getting on the rockhopper is being bored. He was only pulled into crazy space adventures when he was bored. Now...was not one of those times.
Jason finally got past level 5 on Bonzai Master 3000. He was so into the game he didn't realize he played five hours past his bedtime. When he finally stopped all the lights in the house were off.
Jason feeling around for the stairs hit his leg against the table. Pain sored through his bones until he heard a familiar sound. The rockhopper was flying around the room!
"Get in here kid!" Yelled Zidgel.
Jason was confused. Why did Zidgel cal him kid? Why was he not messing with his hair like usual?
"Zidgel whats wrong?"
"Uh...umm...We need your...
Midgel jumped in "We need you to help us at planet Double Doom."
Jason was sucked in and before he could wonder about Zidgel he was off in outer space.
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PostSubject: Re: Danger on Planet Double Doom   Sun Nov 17, 2013 5:43 pm

Please tell me this is still a work in progress.
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PostSubject: Re: Danger on Planet Double Doom   Sun Nov 17, 2013 10:02 pm

yes it is...i just wanted some feedback before i wrote the whole thing
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PostSubject: Re: Danger on Planet Double Doom   Sun Nov 17, 2013 10:53 pm

You can't really get much feedback on a story with probably less than 100 words if it is going to be a full-fledged out story.
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PostSubject: Re: Danger on Planet Double Doom   Mon Nov 18, 2013 8:03 pm

Yeah, but I get interested with a lot of stories just by reading the first paragraph. That's just how I roll.
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PostSubject: Re: Danger on Planet Double Doom   Mon Nov 18, 2013 10:42 pm

Alright then. Hopefully POS can make an actual full chapter soon.
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PostSubject: Re: Danger on Planet Double Doom   Tue Nov 19, 2013 6:58 pm

(bounces on computer chair)
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PostSubject: Re: Danger on Planet Double Doom   Tue Nov 19, 2013 8:19 pm

*taps fingers to side of head*
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PostSubject: Re: Danger on Planet Double Doom   Wed Jan 15, 2014 12:52 am

Is this the fanfic where the Penguins' evil counterparts appear?
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PostSubject: Re: Danger on Planet Double Doom   Wed Jan 15, 2014 12:54 am

I'm doubting you'll get an answer at any time.
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