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POS52401 Penguin
Posts : 111 Join date : 2013-10-28
| Subject: Danger on Planet Double Doom Sun Nov 17, 2013 3:17 pm | |
| Jason discovered that the secret of getting on the rockhopper is being bored. He was only pulled into crazy space adventures when he was bored. Now...was not one of those times. Jason finally got past level 5 on Bonzai Master 3000. He was so into the game he didn't realize he played five hours past his bedtime. When he finally stopped all the lights in the house were off. Jason feeling around for the stairs hit his leg against the table. Pain sored through his bones until he heard a familiar sound. The rockhopper was flying around the room! "Get in here kid!" Yelled Zidgel. Jason was confused. Why did Zidgel cal him kid? Why was he not messing with his hair like usual? "Zidgel whats wrong?" "Uh...umm...We need your... Midgel jumped in "We need you to help us at planet Double Doom." Jason was sucked in and before he could wonder about Zidgel he was off in outer space. | |
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EsterDXL Penguin
Posts : 614 Join date : 2013-11-08 Age : 23 Location : The Rockhopper
| Subject: Re: Danger on Planet Double Doom Sun Nov 17, 2013 5:43 pm | |
| Please tell me this is still a work in progress. | |
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POS52401 Penguin
Posts : 111 Join date : 2013-10-28
| Subject: Re: Danger on Planet Double Doom Sun Nov 17, 2013 10:02 pm | |
| yes it is...i just wanted some feedback before i wrote the whole thing | |
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Scythe312 Admin
Posts : 803 Join date : 2013-10-23 Location : In Your Dreams
| Subject: Re: Danger on Planet Double Doom Sun Nov 17, 2013 10:53 pm | |
| You can't really get much feedback on a story with probably less than 100 words if it is going to be a full-fledged out story. | |
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EsterDXL Penguin
Posts : 614 Join date : 2013-11-08 Age : 23 Location : The Rockhopper
| Subject: Re: Danger on Planet Double Doom Mon Nov 18, 2013 8:03 pm | |
| Yeah, but I get interested with a lot of stories just by reading the first paragraph. That's just how I roll. | |
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Scythe312 Admin
Posts : 803 Join date : 2013-10-23 Location : In Your Dreams
| Subject: Re: Danger on Planet Double Doom Mon Nov 18, 2013 10:42 pm | |
| Alright then. Hopefully POS can make an actual full chapter soon. | |
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EsterDXL Penguin
Posts : 614 Join date : 2013-11-08 Age : 23 Location : The Rockhopper
| Subject: Re: Danger on Planet Double Doom Tue Nov 19, 2013 6:58 pm | |
| (bounces on computer chair) | |
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Scythe312 Admin
Posts : 803 Join date : 2013-10-23 Location : In Your Dreams
| Subject: Re: Danger on Planet Double Doom Tue Nov 19, 2013 8:19 pm | |
| *taps fingers to side of head* | |
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katrinahood Penguin
Posts : 828 Join date : 2013-10-23 Age : 24 Location : Spheniscid Space Station
| Subject: Re: Danger on Planet Double Doom Wed Jan 15, 2014 12:52 am | |
| Is this the fanfic where the Penguins' evil counterparts appear? | |
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Scythe312 Admin
Posts : 803 Join date : 2013-10-23 Location : In Your Dreams
| Subject: Re: Danger on Planet Double Doom Wed Jan 15, 2014 12:54 am | |
| I'm doubting you'll get an answer at any time. | |
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